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1. Twelve years ago | |
2. First | |
3. For a year | |
4. Then | |
5. Two years later | |
6. After three years | |
7. Today |
1. Twelve years ago | my uncle came over from Calcutta without a penny. He didn't have much money. My father had to help him. |
2. First | he worked in another Indian restaurant. He washed the dirty cups and plates. |
3. For a year | he stayed in that job. |
4. Then | he started work as a bus conductor. He liked driving through London. |
5. Two years later | a friend offered him a waiter's job. My uncle learnt to cook and serve Indian food and to write bills. |
6. After three years | he opened his own restaurant in the East end of London. He had to do nearly all the work there. |
7. Today | he has made it. |
Retold: Changing the point of view: "I" instead of "He"
I came over from Calcutta without a penny twelve years ago,
My brother helped me.
I found a job in an Indian restaurant.
I washed the dirty dishes for a year.
Then I worked as a bus conductor.
I drove through London.
After that I worked in a waiter's job.
I cooked and served Indian food and I wrote bills.
Three years later I opened my own restaurant in the East End of London.
Today I've made it.
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